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FRAGMENTS
FINAL DRAFT
Written
by Paul Barakat
Script Editor Graeme Beck
1/. INT. KITCHEN. PRESENT. MORNING.
The harsh glow of the sun glares through the 70’s style kitchen drapes. The kitchen décor is out of date and the place looks like it gets cleaned once a month.
Standing over the old sink is ANNA, an overworked woman in her mid 20’s. The sunlight flares in her face. She tries to crack a few ice cubes out of the container, but they are frozen stuck.
One of the cubes POPS out of the tray.
She grabs the ice cube and runs it down her neck.
The PHONE RINGS.
Anna picks up the phone.
ANNA
HELLO!
VOICE
Anna.
ANNA
(pause)...Yes?
ANNA walks back to the sink with the phone.
VOICE
What are you still doing there?
She continues to try and remove more ice cubes.
VOICE
I just don’t want you to be hurt anymore.
ANNA
I can’t...I have to be here.
ANNA smashes the ice tray. The cubes come CRASHING OUT.
AUDIO OVERLAY: We hear a haunting yell of TONY.
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2/. INT. HALLWAY. PRESENT.
The unknown. TONY’s yell is muffled and echoes. Then Silence.
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3/. INT. KITCHEN. PRESENT.
ANNA places the cubes of ice in a jug of water.
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4/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT. MOMENTS LATER
TONY, a 25 year old unkempt Mediterranean man, haunches on the bed, back to the window. His face is concealed as he thrashes around the pillow dreaming and groaning. He lays on his bed with no sheets, in his YELLOWING chesty bonds and his boxers. The searing heat must be past 40 degrees in this room. The fan is turned off, Near it lays a pair of cracked DUSTY eye glasses.
Beside the bed is a body length mirror. The dark grey drapes are shut tight, cutting out the blaring sunlight.
ANNA enters the room with a jug of iced water. She gently shakes TONY.
TONY spurs jarringly toward ANNA, like some kind of wild animal which is what he looks like. His left eye is badly bruised and slightly closed. The right eye remains wide open with uncertainty and fear. He pulls away, holding his covers up to his mouth like a scared child.
ANNA
Tony.
TONY
Don’t touch me! Get out of here!
ANNA puts the jug on the bedside near the old broken lampshade. She tries to grasp TONY’s hand but he pulls away.
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4/.CONTINUES
ANNA
Tony, it’s me, Anna.
TONY continues to cower like a scared child.
ANNA summons her pain. She pours a glass of water and holds it up to his mouth. TONY scoffs at her, but she forces it down his mouth.
ANNA
The doctor says you should try to get up.
ANNA turns on the fan and opens the drapes. The glaring sunlight shines into the room, which is revealed to be in more of a mess in daylight. TONY’s fear turns to anger as the sensitivity of the light pierces his eyes.
TONY
Close it!
ANNA
You need the fresh air.
TONY
Close the drapes!
ANNA touches TONY’s face. He grabs her hands and pushes her away.
TONY
Close the fucking drapes now!
ANNA
You want the drapes closed! You get up and close them yourself. There is nothing wrong with you- can’t you see that!
(Pointing to her forehead)
The only problem you have is up here!
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4/. CONTINUES
ANNA moves away from the bed. TONY is curls up like a wounded animal.
TONY
Nothing wrong with me… Look at me!
TONY buries his head into his pillow, gnawing at it.
TONY
Just look at me!
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5/. INT. HALLWAY. PRESENT. CONTINUOUS
ANNA closes the door shut. TONY’s whimpering echo through the hallway.
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6/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT. CONTINUOUS.
TONY looks to the curtain, the bright light causing pain in his eyes.
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TONY lunges at the drapes for support. His knees buckle and give way. He falls flat to the ground.
He has nearly closed the whole curtain, but it remains slightly open, with a gleam of light piercing through the gap.
TONY lies slumped against the, exhausted. He groans in pain.
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7/. INT. KITCHEN. PRESENT. MOMENTS LATER.
ANNA begins to wash the dishes. It seems though she is taking forever to clean one dish.
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8/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT. CONTINUOUS.
TONY’s head is against the floor, down for the count. He looks under his bed to see a pair of football boots.
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9/. EXT. OLD BACKYARD. CHILDHOOD PAST. LATE AFTERNOON. B/W
YOUNG TONY, about 8 at this point, is running in the backyard, looking back at his FATHER with a determined look on his face. He wears spectacles and is fairly lanky.
FATHER
Run boy run. The key is to never look back, just never look back.
It slows you down.
Here… catch!
FATHER throws the ball very hard at YOUNG TONY.
YOUNG TONY drops the ball to the ground and fixes his glasses. FATHER towers over him.
FATHER
Shit boy! What’s wrong with you? Do you have a dick?
Did your mother give birth to a boy or girl?
The smile goes off YOUNG TONY’s face.
FATHER
Pass the ball back here darling.
YOUNG TONY looks to the ground and picks up the ball
YOUNG TONY
I don’t want to play anymore…
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9/. Continues
FATHER
Where are your balls? I know you got balls somewhere down there.
Now pass it back.
YOUNG TONY drops the ball and runs back toward the house and up the steps of the patio. FATHER launches the ball at the house as MOTHER stands watching from behind the barred screen door.
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11/. INT. OLD HALLWAY. CHILDHOOD PAST. LATE EVENING. B/W
CRASH. The same lampshade crashes to the floor, shattering the pieces of porcelain.
There is a STRUGGLE between MOTHER and FATHER.
YOUNG TONY watches through a small gap in his bedroom doorway as his FATHER, now violently drunk, slams MOTHER against the wall. He slaps his wife on the face twice, violently gropes her chest and runs his dirty fingers down her legs.
He smothers her neck and rips off her robe.
YOUNG TONY watches from his open door, the shadows of the rape being performed like a play of tragedy on the wall. He straightens his glasses and gains focus on the wall.
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12/ INT. BEDROOM. RECENT PAST
ANNA walks toward TONY and removes her scarf. It drops out of frame.
14/. INT. BEDROOM. RECENT PAST. MID AFTERNOON.
TONY buries himself near ANNA’s neck. She pulls his hair and then gives him a passionate kiss. She rips off his shirt. Buttons fly.
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19/. INT. YOUNG TONY’S BEDROOM. CHILDHOOD PAST. CONTINUOUS. B/W
YOUNG TONY has watched the whole rape. His MOTHER, slumped on the floor, cuts herself on a piece of broken porcelain as she attempts to get up.
His FATHER staggers past and see YOUNG TONY peering through the doorway.
FATHER
You little shit!
YOUNG TONY backs further into his room and cowers under his desk. His glasses fall off. Everything is a blur.
FATHER slams the door open.
FATHER
Get up!
YOUNG TONY begins to stutter.
YOUNG TONY
No pp..please ddd..daddy!
FATHER slowly pulls off his belt.
YOUNG TONY has his hands stretched out for MOTHER.
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19/.CONTINUES
YOUNG TONY
Mummy!...Mummy?
MOTHER walks past the room ignoring him.
FATHER slams the door shut.
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16/ INT. BEDROOM. RECENT PAST. LATER.
ANNA lies in TONY’s arms on the bed. The drapes are open and there is beautiful light. She looks intrigued by the broken lampshade.
TONY
I’ve been meaning to fix it.
ANNA
When did you break it?
TONY
I didn’t break it…someone else did…
…long ago.
TONY begins to play with ANNA’s hair.
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22/. INT. KITCHEN. PRESENT. EARLY AFTERNOON.
ANNA looks through the barred screen door at the clothes line. She looks at the clothes line. There is a blood stained jersey, slowly rotating on the line.
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23/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
A drop of blood falls onto TONY’S Jersey after he is knocked down.
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24/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT. CONTINUOUS
TONY pulls himself up and kneels before the whirring fan.
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25/. EXT. OLD BACKYARD. TEENAGE PAST. EARLY AFTERNOON. B/W
TEENAGE TONY tries to get the whirring blades working with the lawnmower.
He is now a young man and still wears his glasses.
FATHER
Why haven’t you finished boy?
TEENAGE TONY looks across STARTLED by his FATHER’s presence. He begins to stutter.
TEENAGE TONY
MMM...Mower’s bbb...busted…
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25/. CONTINUES
FATHER
Bbbbusted is it? Stop fucking about. You’re weak...
FATHER taunts his son like a bully. TEENAGE TONY becomes increasingly agitated. FATHER then begins to throw a few punches, TEENAGE TONY’s spectacles fall to the ground and CRACK.
FATHER
You’re as weak as piss...just like your mother.
TEENAGE TONY snaps. He raises his fist to stop FATHER and stands tall against him. The violent energy channels itself through their fists.
TEENAGE TONY twists his FATHER’s hand and slams him against the fence, choking his airways. He stares into his FATHER’s eyes, the effect of his quivering still evident in his body language. TEENAGE TONY releases him and picks up his glasses.
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26/. EXT. BACKYARD BALCONY. RECENT PAST.
TEENAGE TONY strides past MOTHER, who is bringing out the washing. She has a cigarette.
FATHER passes his wife on the balcony steps.
She stands below him on the steps.
FATHER
See how he treats me? Your bloody son!
MOTHER walks back up the steps, slightly defiant.
MOTHER
MY SON? He’s all you, you fucking bastard! Your mirror image.
MOTHER subtly exhales her smoke in FATHER’s face.
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26a/ INT. HALLWAY. TEENAGE PAST.
TEENAGE TONY looks at his bent and cracked glasses. They sit awkwardly off balance on his face.
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27/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT. CONTINUOUS.
The same OLD CRACKED GLASSES sit on the bedside table. TONY looks across at the cracked lens.
TONY becomes agitated. He lifts himself up, haunched on his knees. He notices a MOUTHGUARD, sitting in it’s case under some football socks.
He pulls it out and stares at it. He places it in his mouth and begins to slowly stretch his neck.
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28/. INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST.
ANNA and TONY sit on the lounge. He runs his hand down the side of her face, caressing her. He starts to kiss her fingers.
ANNA starts to unbutton his shirt, revealing his bandaged ribs. TONY buries himself into her neck.
TONY
WHY don’t you come and watch me?
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29/. INT. TUNNEL. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST.(FS)
Doors CRASH open as TONY runs out of the dark tunnel with his weekend warriors.
TONY stretches his neck as the ball is being prepared to be kicked.
The men wait for the ultimate game in brutality.
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30/. INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST.
ANNA begins to resist TONY’s advances by moving away from him.
ANNA
I can’t do it. I won’t sit through it.
TONY
Why?
TONY forcibly moves toward her.
TONY is sexually aggressive with ANNA and she struggles to push away his advances.
ANNA
It’s how you are with everything.
Do you need to be so brutal? CUT TO:
31/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY has a fight with his opposite number. Blood ensues.
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32/. INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST
TONY releases himself off her, slightly frustrated.
TONY
(smiles)
Of course. Only when I have to be.
He moves in on her again.
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33/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY gets hit fairly high above the throat in a tackle.
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34/ INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST
TONY continues to advance on ANNA, who resists.
ANNA
I’m worried.
TONY
(getting pissed off)
Worried? ...About what?
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ANNA turns her back on TONY.
TONY
What?!
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ANNA
I’m afraid that one day you’ll...
That one day you’ll....
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41/. INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST.
TONY begins to smother ANNA forcefully, and she is pinned against the couch.
ANNA
For Christ sake, you are closer to that game than you are to me!
She pushes him back across the tender ribs. He clutches at them in pain.
TONY (scowling)
That’s the price I have to pay.
ANNA pulls out a cigarette. She lights it and begins to inhale.
ANNA
Well, that price is too high for me.
TONY is very pissed off. There is an awkward pause.
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38/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT.
TONY punches the air. He starts to do stretches on his upper body. He begins to breathe heavily in preparation.
35/ EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY has a verbal slangning match with MUG
37/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST.
TONY knocks out an opponent cold.
40/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST
TONY fends off a player
44/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY busts an opponents lip. Blood ensues.
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45/ INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT
TONY tries to pull himself up, but falls back to the floor.
He begins to breathe heavily and grunts like an animal.
TONY
Give me the ball cunt.
Gimme the ball...
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45a/.EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST
TONY receives the ball from MUG and begins to run into open space.
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46/ INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST.
ANNA hinges on TONY’s response. TONY looks away from her.
ANNA
Well...tell me.
Why are you still there?
TONY constrains anger as he tries to explain.
TONY
Y’know, I’ve come so close to that line.
TONY (voice over)
Anna, I just have to get over...
47/ EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
Repeat shots of TONY coming close to the line but falling short.
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48/. INT LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST
ANNA looks at TONY trying to contain laughter.
ANNA
(Slightly mocking)...Is that it?... you’re still trying to cross that stupid line?
ANNA blows smoke toward TONY’s embarrassed face.
ANNA (cont)
And then what?
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48/. CONTINUES
TONY starts to grasp at the back of the couch. He can’t look ANNA in the eye. He has been humiliated. He begins to tap on his thighs lightly, nervously.
TONY
...It’s within my grasp.
ANNA rises from the couch abruptly.
ANNA
Well if that’s the pain and destruction you have to cause to get over a fucking line, maybe you’re not meant to cross it…
ANNA
Don’t you see you’re losing yourself to this…
TONY rises and shakes his head in disapproval.
TONY (slightly stuttering)
No,nnn...no
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49/.INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT.
TONY begins to slap his thighs repeatedly building up the pace and strength as he recognizes the face in the mirror.
TONY
It’s within my grasp...
I’m so close...
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50/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY finds open space and begins to run toward the line.
TONY (voice over whispering)
I...I’m so close...
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51/. INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST
TONY grabs at ANNA
TONY
I’M SO FUCKING CLOSE!
ANNA rejects his response and stands up with her back to him.
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52/ INT. LOUNGE ROOM. RECENT PAST.
TONY stands up and grabs ANNA trying to plead with her
TONY
Baby, you know it. Just let me do this. I’m still the same. I’m still me…
TONY grabs her violently, and swings her to face him.
ANNA
TONY! STOP IT!
TONY slaps ANNA in the face.
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53/ INT. FOOTBALL SHEDS. PRESENT.
TONY is being slapped into psyche mode by MUG
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54/. INT. HALL WAY. RECENT PAST
ANNA runs down the hall way painfully holds her face. TONY runs after her and forcefully turns her to the wall against her will.
TONY
Don’t you see! I’ve seen the fucking line.
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TONY
All I need is the momentum. Just never look back.
He slaps her again.
ANNA
TONY! …STOP IT!
TONY
It’s there…I CAN SEE IT.
I have to get over it.
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TONY roughly gropes ANNA, forcibly smothering her.
TONY
I know you want it too!
It’s right in front of you can’t you see it!
55/ EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
MUG has busted the line and offloaded a ball to TONY, who flies through the gap.
TONY is running to the line
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57/. EXT. BEDROOM. PRESENT
TONY
Run Tony run, Just never look back.
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58/.INT. HALLWAY. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY has pinned ANNA against the wall and forceably rips off her blouse.
Through his glasses, a YOUNG TONY stares at them through the small opening of his bedroom door.
TONY notices him and shakes his head anxiously trying to erase him and looks back at ANNA.
She is a blurry figure. He closes his eyes again.
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58/. CONTINUES
ANNA
TONY! Stop it!...
Don’t do this… please...
TONY
Sssshh...sshut UP!
TONY opens his eyes and now sees a TEENAGE TONY standing in the bedroom doorway.
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59/ EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. (FS)
TONY loses focus of the tryline.
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61/ INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT.
TONY rips open the curtains, yelling. The curtains comes CRASHING down. LIGHT. Masses of light flood into the room. TONY stands in a mythical creature pose, screaming.
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62/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. FS
TONY continues to scream.
TONY running close to the line
HIGH TACKLE. BLOOD.
60/ INT. HALLWAY. RECENT PAST. B/W
TONY lets ANNA go and stumbles to his knees.
TONY
NO! ...I’m nn..not like them. Nnn...never like them...
64/. EXT. FOOTBALL FIELD. RECENT PAST. B/W
TONY lays an inch short of the goal line. We slowly move away from his body, lying limp on the empty field.
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65/. INT. HALLWAY. RECENT PAST.
TONY looks down the hollow hallway.
TONY
Never like him.
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66/. INT. BATHROOM. PRESENT.
A hand turns on the bath tap. The water rushes out.
TONY’s CLEAN SHAVEN face slowly emerges from the water. His cleansing. He still carries the physical scars of battle.
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67/. INT. BEDROOM. PRESENT.
TONY sits on his bed, facing the window. The light is beautiful, almost surreal. ANNA enters the room with the fixed lamp in her hands. A small drop of blood runs from under a Band-Aid. She places it back down on the table.
She places her hand on TONY’S shoulder. TONY feels the touch and turns quickly. He is wearing his cracked glasses, his eye still blackened.
TONY lifts her hand and runs it along his face.
TONY looks towards the fixed lampshade.
ANNA
Don’t touch it, it’s still wet.
TONY smiles.
(Cont.)ANNA
(smiling)
When are you going to get those fixed?
TONY
Anna...don’t ever let go of me...
Don’t ever let me go.
ANNA pulls him to her womb. She caresses his hair.
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